...Is up.
http://theguyds.com/2009/09/04/meat ing-men/
I'd never have used the word "t-bone" but at least I got him to remove "meatatarian" in his rewrite and about half of it is what I submitted on Tuesday. We compromised after I fought him. It's still somewhat condescending but his original rewrite was more condescending. He removed my use of the word "perpetuate" and replaced it with a synonymous phrase, presumably because he thinks people wouldn't know what it meant.
P.S. If you want to comment on it, please do it at the blog, not here. Thanks.
http://theguyds.com/2009/09/04/meat
I'd never have used the word "t-bone" but at least I got him to remove "meatatarian" in his rewrite and about half of it is what I submitted on Tuesday. We compromised after I fought him. It's still somewhat condescending but his original rewrite was more condescending. He removed my use of the word "perpetuate" and replaced it with a synonymous phrase, presumably because he thinks people wouldn't know what it meant.
P.S. If you want to comment on it, please do it at the blog, not here. Thanks.
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Current Music: Mad Men, season 3, episode 3
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